[DWJ] assistance needed

Minnow minnow at belfry.org.uk
Sun Jan 18 08:37:54 EST 2009


oh well, the rules apply:
> "who at the present neither of whom know each other"  ought not to be
> direct quotation from anything that got past any editor into print.  Nor
> should "her attempts to reconnect with her pat are more than just some
> kind of remembrance its of knowing whether things were for the better"
> has three third-form errors in it that ought to have been suppressed
> before it was published.
There ought to be a comma after ...better" followed by the word "which".

*sigh* need more coffffeeeeeeeeeeee

Minnow



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