[DWJ] Bees

Aimee Smith aimees001 at gmail.com
Sun Apr 26 06:07:41 EDT 2009

> No, I wasn't wearing any gear.

> (snip)

> MArk Allums

Wow! Thank you so much!
I am now struck by how much information I get told (about bees  
generally) that I unwittingly have put into my story already.
Eg. The main character likes watching them swarm, though misses it due  
to a royal visit in the first chapter, and the bit about bees being  
pretty laid back, especially when swarming.
But it's so nice to know exactly what it's like witnessing a swarm!
I too agree with Minnow: some very illuminating analogies, disjointed  
or no.



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