Lackey

Kyla Tornheim kyla at sccs.swarthmore.edu
Mon Jun 24 16:32:52 EDT 2002


On Mon, 24 Jun 2002, Melissa Proffitt wrote:

> They seem to enjoy the bubble-gum aspect and are willing to
> put up with the writing for it.
See, my main problem isn't with the writing in general (word choices,
sentence structure), because I get distracted by the incredibly lousy
punctuation. I mean, there's an editor there who is clearly not doing his
or her job. Lackey blatantly misuses commas repeatedly, such that I am
forced to mentally convert them to semicolons. It's dreadful.

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